Sunday 11 August 2019

writing

Mara is a smart and determined girl who tries different thing help the little boy pilot fly the star up into the  air. She was sad every time she failed. She thought and kept trying to get the little boy in the sky in the end she used her own plans like a sail.
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2 comments:

  1. Qaiden1 September 2019 at 17:35

    Hi Andy, It's Qaiden from Kawakawa Primary School. I like this blog comment because you used a clear colour and a clear font so that everyone can read it clearly and that you added a photo of the person you were writing about. What is this a narrative or is it based off of a true story. Check out my blog
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  2. Tupakari1 September 2019 at 19:46

    Hi Andy, it's Tu pakari from Kawakawa Primary School. I like your writing because you used a clear colour and a clear font that everyone can see and read your writing it clearly. I like that you added a photo of a person you were writing about and I like that you added things how you feel about your person.

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