I am learning to use correct recount structure independently.
To do this I will have:
Introduction - who, where, when, what
End with a reflection
The Most Boring Day
On a loveLy Sunday Konrad,Dad and I went up the bush by Tamaiti’s house. We went up there on our pushbikes for a ride. Dad said let's go for a ride up the bush.Finally we were up there. We got up the `hill Then we went down the hill. I crashed into Konrad. He fell off I said that’s what I was waiting for. When we got up the hill. I fell off. I said to my dad this is boring when are we going? Dad said no fall off again. I said ohh man I dropped my head and derived and falled off. Then I had to walk my bike home because my handle bar fell off. I said no I said can we go home dad said yes so we went home then got on the road. It was funny day with my brother Konrad and my dad.
Next time I will try use adjectives in my writing. Adjectives are describing wold's