Tuesday 1 November 2016

Here is my weekend recount.

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous21 November 2016 at 13:02

    Hi Andy well done on your story.I like how you used time words to sequence your events also how you used all sorts of punctuation. Try to make your layout smaller next time. Blog you later.

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  2. Anonymous27 February 2017 at 14:53

    Hi Andy, I really enjoyed reading your recount about your weekend in Whangarei at Kmart. I like how you used descriptive words to show how you felt.I really enjoyed reading your story. Maybe next time you can add what was your favourite part about your weekend in Whangarei at Kmart. Other than that what an amazing story.

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