Thursday 19 November 2015

My story is about when we went to the pools.

Tuesday 27th October
Pools
On Sunday we went to the pools me and my dad, my mum. my brother.
We went to my sister Huhanah’s birthday. It was cold when I hopped in. When the waves came I ran to the shallow. Then Uncle Jim came with some pizza. I didn’t  want pizza.
Next we went to eat the cake. After I went  straight back in the Pool. NEXT I went to the slide then we went home.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 November 2015 at 14:28

    Hi Andy, You have an amazing story about Huhanah's birthday party at the pools. Next time try putting in some interesting sentences. Blog you later.

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  2. Anonymous17 March 2016 at 17:23

    Hi Andy I like all of the time words you used in your story.

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