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Backflip You Beauty!
I was so lucky because I was going to get taught how to backflip. Konrad,Mum,Dad,Piri,Jaja,uncle Jim,xivan and I. Went to the Auckland Jump wold. When we first got in we had to pay then we had to put on our bracelets and socks to get into Jump wold. I ran as fast as a lamborghini next I jumped and done a fold flip. Then bang I saw Konrad he came to get me he said should I teach you how to backflip. My eyes sparkled and I shouted “yes”
First Konrad told me to Jump backwards and i'll slap your legs so you can do a backflip my Konrad will do it 6 times. Befor I do it on my leg’s.
I was so proud of myself because I can do a backflip. I had an awsome day. With my family. My smile was like it was stuck to my face.