Thursday, 5 March 2020

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Title friendship
I am writing about explaining writing.  


A Honest friend
An honest friend is someone who tells the truth who does not lie to others.


Secondly trustful: 
is someone who you could trust to look after a kid.


Lastly caring: 
A caring friend is someone who loves others and stops fights because he or she
dont want them to hurt themselves and someone who cares at all times.


Conclusion:
A honest friend is someone who tells the truth secondly trustful friend
is someone who you could trust to look after a kid.
A caring friend is someone who loves others.
                        
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